Back in the day, I used to read two amazing KnucklesxRouge(OTP) webcomics on DeviantArt, but as the dumb 12 year old I was, I failed to realize that the people who made them had their own lives and I got terribly annoyed when they took way too long to update.
I mean, just draw the comic??? How hard can it be??? It so happened that I decided that I could do a comic too! I mean, they're quick to make, right?? I could make them look good!
Having no idea of what plot I would do, I just crapped out a few pages of this atrocity... Coming up with a story as I drew, the cover ended up being extremely misleading and the scanned pages barely visible, not to mention that EVERYTHING IS SO OOC.
WITH A COVER LIKE THIS, YOU ALREADY KNOW IT CAN'T BE ANYTHING GOOD
(Idk why but apparently Rouge was a princess???)
Rouge's mother: Just open your wings and try to fly...
Rouge(Child); I can't mommy :'(
Mother: Keep trying my dear, you can do it. (A+ parenting)
Rouge: Okay, I can do it.
Rouge: Look mommy! I'm flying!
Mother: Congratulations Rouge. I'm proud of you!
Rouge: Can I go outside and play, please?
Mother: Of course!
Mother: Just don't go to the dark forest, okay?
Rouge: Okay!
Rouge: I wonder what's in the dark forest...
Rouge: I'm just taking a small look...
Rouge: ...
???: Well, what do we have here...?
Obvious silhouette of Knuckles: It's a bat!
Rouge: Who's there...?
Knuckles(Child): Who are you? And what are you doing here?
Rouge: I-I'm sorry... I was just,,,
Rouge: ... x'(
Knuckles: ,,,
Knuckles: Hey! D-Don't cry! I was just kidding!
Rouge: Okay... (This dialog hmhmhhhmmm)
Knuckles: What's your name?
Rouge: Rouge...
Knuckles: My name is Knuckles!
Rouge: Wanna be my friend?
Knuckles: Nobody likes me, they say that I'm stupid and ugly.
Rouge: No you aren't! First I thought you were bad but actually you are very nice.
(THIS IS WORSE THAN I REMEMBER)
Knuckles: Really? You think so?
Rouge: Yeah! Want to play around?
Knuckles: Okay!
Rouge: Tag! You're it!
Knuckles: ...
Rouge: Hey... Why don't you tag...?
Knuckles: I-I don't know how to play...
???: C'MON KILL HER!
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In the last pages I got way too tired and I realized that comics were a lot harder than they looked so I just dropped this project, too showing a lot more respect for the work that people put to make the comic pages. I had no idea of who the new character in the corner was, I literally just threw them in there in order to be spooky and get people to be curious about my comic, which it worked for some, but since I'm a buzzkill, I stopped :')
ALSO, LITERALLY ONLY NOW I realized why the dialog on the fourth page looked so similar and it suddenly explains a lot more things. This comic was completely ripped off of the Lion King II movie with Kovu and Kiara and it actually explains why Rouge's family was royalty?? Well played 12 year old me... Well played... If anyone wants to see how this comic continues, just imagine the entire Lion King II movie but with Knuckles and Rouge replacing Kovu and Kiara, because it's probably how it would have gone.
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